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Entry for the Happiness Contest of
 It clearly states that it's MUSIC that makes me happy~~~~<3 (one of the most important things to me too is my ipod ;w; hihihi) Here is my OC, Muirne, who feels the same way 8"D Title is stolen from 4 Minute's "Muzik" ..LOL;;;  I really like the song xD Go listen to it too ;u; ( to the people who know my OC.. err... Soon gave Muirne the outfit ok!! xD~ ) edit: (realizations xD) her mouth is a bit off.. >< agg too lazy to fix, sry; her right elbow is too sharp omg XDD haha~~~ edit2: thank you for all the critiques! XD; helped me a lot<3 i'm surprised none of you mentioned the hideous mouth ;A; ..now that i've stared at this artwork long enough, I already see the flaws that you all said xD edit3: 9/29/09 I won second place in the contest!! ;w;  ahh~ i'm so happy~ thanks so much zuni & judges! XD Comments
 =o PRETTIFUL COLORS~! xD AND very very cuuuute~! Great Job!
-- VOCALOID FAN ALERT!  [link] join my vocaloid family? The Past: our cradle, not our prison; there is danger as well as appeal in its glamor. The past is for inspiration, not imitation, for continuation, not repetition.  aiya!!!! hontoni kawaiiiiii X3 the mouth's a bit weird???but WTH, its muirne!!!! with the cutest outfit evahhhh!!!!! i lluuuurv her pose, hair, and of course, EYES!!!! X3
-- "Baek beondo man beonirado, on and on precious love!" ~ EunHae Up for a Mary Sue??? Please click here to view my Mary-Sue project *Anyafish* lol thank u~ ;u;
-- I'm genie for you, boy~ ♥ ♫ Hehe thanks thanks~
Yieahhh~ something wrong with the mouth xD;;; -- I'm genie for you, boy~ ♥ ♫  oh wellls....still very cute!!!
-- "Baek beondo man beonirado, on and on precious love!" ~ EunHae Up for a Mary Sue??? Please click here to view my Mary-Sue project *Anyafish*  LOL when I saw this in my deviantWatch I immediately knew that you were talking about 4Minute. Gotta love their new album :] -- ~ ♫ Even without any words; heee~ kpop fan! ;u;
lol thanks so much~~ xD -- I'm genie for you, boy~ ♥ ♫ hihihi~xD <333 Yep!
-- I'm genie for you, boy~ ♥ ♫  SO CUTE HEHEHEHEHEHEEE
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Critiques
First of all, if you look at the eyes, they are spread apart TOO much. They should be closer to the nose than they are now. Also, since this is a detailed drawing, the clouds are as detailed as everything else is. You should make the clouds more detailed to fit in with everything else. I don't know if there's anything wrong with the knees, but it just looks a tad bit odd.
Overall, you are an INCREDIBLE artist and I hope this critique helps you!
~Emmy
Eyes:
WAY to far apart. and also, they don't seem to be focusing. Both pupils should be roughly "aimed" at the same thing.
Bent Arm:
Upper am has too much concave bend to it. It's as if she has no muscles. Round out her arm a little more.
The elbow doesn't look like it's connected to the upper arm at all. It looks as if it's just plastered on...
Legs: Generally, too far apart for someone with her stance.
ad the knees have too much definition. Tone the contrast down a bit. Also, they "U" shadow you did also gives the knees a really awkward shape. Look a real knee and see the general shadows it casts.
Besides that, the colors are magnificent and your warm/cool contrast is done nicely!
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